[Nobody]

Just a quick thing I noticed that might put your paper on ignore mode, is the discription of the big bang as an explosion. Eventhough the name implies an explosion, the inflationary theory and bb theory go hand-in-hand, and the consensus leans toward a big expansion with the picture of space stretching out and carrying matter with it as it expands. The cmb being more the result of decay of particles than due to a first exposion.