[Graybeard]

I read it .... you didn't lose me, tho I thought you would. My opinion doesn't really count for much but it makes sense to me.

Its along the same lines as how I think, but have never been able to express. 5 stars for that alone.

I can't find anything to criticise in the science. But, if it were mine, would break the paragraphs down so that the first sentence expressed the idea, the next three or for explained details.

Separate each paragraph by idea/point and keep apart by at least one line. Indent the first sentence.

The scansion was the only thing I did not like. Found it difficult to read and kept losing my place. Hope you don't mind these remarks.


Thanks for sharing, and will check on further posts.

cool bananas ... greg.