I'm a professional writer if you need a hand or someone to do some editing.
mswriter
I'm a professional writer if you need a hand or someone to do some editing.
mswriter
austintorn@aol.com (10-25-2010), r.p.bibra (10-30-2010)
Yes, I can always use help, as I’m self-publishing a book of it. This story has gone through several renditions over the years, hopefully improving, and now becoming close to final.
When I play the computer voice in the video it helps to reveal some tough to find spelling mistakes (like using ‘breath’ instead of ‘breathe’) and where commas were left out. Of course, the computer voice isn’t perfect, it saying ‘live’ with a long i sound when it should be pronounced as ‘liv’ sometimes (same for ‘read’ as sounding ‘red’), although I can see why. I could always mispell (ha-ha on that one) for the voice on purpose if I wanted to bother, or get (buy) some better voices, or even buy a screenplay thing to have different voices for each character.
Then there is the pigeon English of the ninjas…
The songs are mostly epic-type music.
I make about a third of the video and borrow (steal) the rest of the best from YouTube.
Someday, like soon, e-books and their readers will have video to go with the books.
Some of the characters are ToeQuestors and many are still around, such as Rascal [Puff], Fredrick, and Graybeard, and more.
You’re the first to really comment on this thread, so, thanks!
I love looking into the way people think. Thanks for the response.
mswriter
labelwench (10-28-2010)
It is indeed fascinating to observe the ideas brought forward, the means of their expression, and how others react and interact in response.
There is a unique perspective to observation that is transformed once one enters into an exchange of dialogue.
I would not suggest that one is to be esteemed over the other, only that they are different?
Kind regards,
Lorrina
So many paths to the same destination,
would, but I could, experience them all...
This story, I must confess, has inspired me to start formulating a spin-off.
The "master" role will be a counter-part of sorts to "Nobody." His name will be Sumone, the sumyoureye warrior of wisdom. To counter ninja intelligence of course. Maybe we could have a cross-over issue called, Pen and Sword.
"I act like you act, I do what you do, but I don’t know, what it’s like to be you. What consciousness is, I ain’t got a clue. I got the Zombie Blues!"
austintorn@aol.com (11-08-2010)
Sounds good, Meem.
Is anyone near to catching up here?
(Should I post more episodes?)
Trish departs Niihau
No words.
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